NAWELLE: Then don't bury it. Let the story breathe through more mouths. Give it away.
VINCE: We misread the voice. The lead wasn't resonating. I own that.
VINCE: Budget?
DRAMATURG: Technically—splitting the role changes structural beats.
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(They all look at each other. Nawelle opens her notebook.)
NAWELLE: Start with memory. Not one memory, many. Each person a shard. NAWELLE: Then don't bury it
NAWELLE: Less camera, more bodies. It's cheaper and truer.
VINCE: Then we change the beats. We don't have the luxury of perfection, only of honesty. VINCE: We misread the voice
SOUND DESIGNER: We can stitch them—overlapping audio, intercut images.